In compare and contrast writing we have to write four paragraphs.
In paragraph 1 we have to write which two things we are going to compare and contrast.
In paragraph 2 we have to write three or four similarities e.g the first similarity…… the second similarity is …….. Another similarity is ………. Yet another similarity is ………. In paragraph 3 we wrote the 3 or 4 differences. In conclusion we must write our opinion.
Tuesday, 15 December 2009
Sunday, 13 December 2009
How olive oil is made
Manufacturing olive oil is a long and difficult process but it is simple if you follow these steps carefully and you will produce good quality oil.
First, between September and December, olives are harvested or picked by hand or with sticks and rakes. Then, they are collected on nets beneath the trees. After that, leaves and small stones are removed and the olives are washed to eliminate any remaining impurities before crushing. Then, within the first 24-36 hours of picking the olives are pressed by using granite stones. After that, the paste obtained is layered on nets and then it is put under pressure from a screw or hydraulic press. The liquid produced is collected and put through a centrifugal separator to separate water and impurities from oil. Finally, the olive oil is distributed to the markets.
In conclusion, as you can see making olive oil is a long and complicated process but if you follow these steps you will get good results.
First, between September and December, olives are harvested or picked by hand or with sticks and rakes. Then, they are collected on nets beneath the trees. After that, leaves and small stones are removed and the olives are washed to eliminate any remaining impurities before crushing. Then, within the first 24-36 hours of picking the olives are pressed by using granite stones. After that, the paste obtained is layered on nets and then it is put under pressure from a screw or hydraulic press. The liquid produced is collected and put through a centrifugal separator to separate water and impurities from oil. Finally, the olive oil is distributed to the markets.
In conclusion, as you can see making olive oil is a long and complicated process but if you follow these steps you will get good results.
Wednesday, 9 December 2009
The UAE & Brunei
As we all know, both UAE and Brunei are rich countries, so in this essay I am going to write about the similarities and differences between them.
There are four major similarities between the UAE and Brunei. The first similarity is Islam. Both of them share the same religion which is Islam. The second similarity is airlines. Both countries have national airlines. Another similarity is that both have oil and gas. Both economies depend on oil and gas and this makes them rich countries. Yet another similarity is hereditary monarchies. Both of them have hereditary monarchies as the government system.
Although there are some similarities between the UAE and Brunei, there are also some differences between them. The first difference is geographic location. The UAE is in the Middle East in contrast to Brunei which is in the Far East. The second difference is climate. The UAE only has two seasons summer and winter but Brunei is the same all year round and has a normal season that means they have four season. Another difference is building style. In Brunei they build in thier houses on stilts because they have a lot of rain in contrast to the UAE . Yet another difference is the steering wheel. In the UAE the steering wheels is on the left side but in Brunei the steering wheel is on the right side.
In conclusion, the both countries are safe and beautiful and I hope to visit Brunei in future.
There are four major similarities between the UAE and Brunei. The first similarity is Islam. Both of them share the same religion which is Islam. The second similarity is airlines. Both countries have national airlines. Another similarity is that both have oil and gas. Both economies depend on oil and gas and this makes them rich countries. Yet another similarity is hereditary monarchies. Both of them have hereditary monarchies as the government system.
Although there are some similarities between the UAE and Brunei, there are also some differences between them. The first difference is geographic location. The UAE is in the Middle East in contrast to Brunei which is in the Far East. The second difference is climate. The UAE only has two seasons summer and winter but Brunei is the same all year round and has a normal season that means they have four season. Another difference is building style. In Brunei they build in thier houses on stilts because they have a lot of rain in contrast to the UAE . Yet another difference is the steering wheel. In the UAE the steering wheels is on the left side but in Brunei the steering wheel is on the right side.
In conclusion, the both countries are safe and beautiful and I hope to visit Brunei in future.
Sunday, 6 December 2009
Reflection 3
In process essays we used present passive which means is and are with past participle, e.g . oranges are graded. And the essay structure is similar to procedure. Introduction, main paragraph, conclusion: 25+100+25=150 words. And we used the linking words, the same as procedure: first, secondly, next, after that, finally.
Wednesday, 18 November 2009
Compare and Contrast between the UAE and KSA
As we all know, both the UAE and the KSA belong to the GCC. Also they have helped each other for a long time. Nowadays, the relationship between them has become closer. In this essay I am going to write about the similarities and differences between them.
There are three major similarities between the UAE and the KSA. The first similarity is language. Both UAE people and KSA people speak Arabic and this makes communication easy. Another similarity is clothes. UAE people and KSA people wear dishdash and gutrah. Yet another similarity is petrol. Both of them depend on petrol as a major income and petrol is a very important part of the in economy
Although there are some similarities between the UAE and the KSA, there are also some differences between them. The first difference is that the UAE has cinemas in our malls but in the KSA they do not have any cinema. Another difference is area. The KSA is bigger than UAE. Yet another difference is currency. The UAE currency is the dirham but the KSA currency is the riyal.
Overall, the differences outweigh the similarities. However, I advise anyone to go to the UAE because they will find anything they want. Also I advise anyone who goes to the KSA to do Omrah and Hajj.
There are three major similarities between the UAE and the KSA. The first similarity is language. Both UAE people and KSA people speak Arabic and this makes communication easy. Another similarity is clothes. UAE people and KSA people wear dishdash and gutrah. Yet another similarity is petrol. Both of them depend on petrol as a major income and petrol is a very important part of the in economy
Although there are some similarities between the UAE and the KSA, there are also some differences between them. The first difference is that the UAE has cinemas in our malls but in the KSA they do not have any cinema. Another difference is area. The KSA is bigger than UAE. Yet another difference is currency. The UAE currency is the dirham but the KSA currency is the riyal.
Overall, the differences outweigh the similarities. However, I advise anyone to go to the UAE because they will find anything they want. Also I advise anyone who goes to the KSA to do Omrah and Hajj.
Sunday, 8 November 2009
Making Orange Juice
As we all know, orange juice is a very healthy drink, full of vitamin C. Making orange juice is a long process and this is a description of the process of producing high-quality orange juice.
The first stage in making orange juice is the fruit is unloaded from the truck. In this stage the oranges are graded, washed and sized. After that the juice is extracted. Next the waste is sent for use as animal feed. Then the juice is evaporated (high temperature for a short time) and it is concentrated. Then it is stored in refrigerated storage. After that it is canned by machine. After that it is transported from the manufacturer to where it will be sold. Finally, the water is added to the concentrate.
As you can see, making orange juice is an easy process. If you follow the steps described then you will be successful.
The first stage in making orange juice is the fruit is unloaded from the truck. In this stage the oranges are graded, washed and sized. After that the juice is extracted. Next the waste is sent for use as animal feed. Then the juice is evaporated (high temperature for a short time) and it is concentrated. Then it is stored in refrigerated storage. After that it is canned by machine. After that it is transported from the manufacturer to where it will be sold. Finally, the water is added to the concentrate.
As you can see, making orange juice is an easy process. If you follow the steps described then you will be successful.
Saturday, 7 November 2009
Reflection 2
In narrative writing we have to write four paragraphs:
In the introduction we used past conrinuous e.g: I was eating my dinner with my friends with something happened
In paragraph 2 we have to describe what we saw e.g: Suddenly, we came across an unbelievable scene.
In paragraph 3 we describe what happened
In conclusion we describe how did we feel?
In the introduction we used past conrinuous e.g: I was eating my dinner with my friends with something happened
In paragraph 2 we have to describe what we saw e.g: Suddenly, we came across an unbelievable scene.
In paragraph 3 we describe what happened
In conclusion we describe how did we feel?
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